Template:Did you know nominations/Neomysis integer
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:34, 5 March 2014 (UTC)
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Neomysis integer
[edit]- ... that the opossum shrimp Neomysis integer inhabits both low salinity estuaries and high salinity pools on the foreshore?
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Created/expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nominated at 10:22, 4 March 2014 (UTC).
Hi, Cwmhiraeth. Nice article as usual; don't think I have any issues to pick with this one. Article went from 423 characters/69 words to 2694 characters/447 words of prose, and is well cited. Hook statements are properly cited within article. The only nitpick that I have is that "of which" is written three times in quick succession in the "Description" section; mind changing a few of them? This shouldn't be an issue with approval for DYK. Thanks in advance. Cloudchased (talk) 19:01, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks. I have removed one of the offending "of which"s. They are sometimes necessary to avoid short sentences and repetition. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:00, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
- Looks good to go, then. Cloudchased (talk) 20:06, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks. I have removed one of the offending "of which"s. They are sometimes necessary to avoid short sentences and repetition. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:00, 4 March 2014 (UTC)
