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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:24, 20 January 2012 (UTC)

Save The Bay

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Created/expanded by Luciferwildcat (talk). Self nom at 01:06, 11 January 2012 (UTC)

  • New: yes. Length: definitely OK. Article generally seems good and sourced. The hook has a wording problem - landfill sounds like it should be measured in cubic metres (or cubic feet) - it has a volume, not a length. The hook leaves the reader confused (not curious) as to whether it's a 43km by 43km area of the bay, or 43 sq. km, or even 43 cubic km. The article itself makes the meaning clear. So a slight rewording, and using shorter, snappier words, and using Template:convert, is enough to improve the hook. Although this is not the simple English wikipedia, it's still better to use simpler words, if the meaning is essentially the same, so i also replaced "demolished" by "destroyed". I propose ALT1. Boud (talk) 21:05, 16 January 2012 (UTC)