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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 04:31, 4 April 2012 (UTC)

Soedjatmoko

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... that Soedjatmoko was expelled from medical school but went on to become rector of the United Nations University?

ALT1: ... that Soedjatmoko went to Harvard but received a doctorate from Yale?

ALT2: ... that Soedjatmoko was Indonesia's first chargé d'affaires?

ALT3: ... that Soedjatmoko, who had argued for recognition of Indonesia's independence at the UN, was accused of planning the Malari incident?

ALT4: ... that Soedjatmoko Mangoendiningrat dropped his last name partly as it reminded him of feudalism?

Comment: ~~To be developed tomorrow my time (UTC+7), so no review for now, please.~~ Alright, ready

Created/expanded by Redyka94 (talk), Crisco 1492 (talk). Nominated by Crisco 1492 (talk) at 16:31, 22 March 2012 (UTC)

Reviewed: Kwakiutl (statue)

The article's length, date and sourcing are OK. There is no sign of plagiarism/copyvio. The hooks are all short enough and supported by sources. The first hook is fine. The ALT1 doesn't seem that unusual, I imagine there are lots about whom that could be said, probably need to add that the Harvard course was not completed. ALT2 is OK, but less interesting in my view. ALT3 is fine. ALT4 should probably include 'partly' as the source says that it was also to show independence from his father. I prefer the first hook. Mikenorton (talk) 20:54, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

"Partly" added, thanks for the review. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:15, 1 April 2012 (UTC)