Template:Did you know nominations/Tattarisuo case

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The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 23:02, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

Tattarisuo case

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Investigation of the Tattarisuo's spring in 1931

... that the mutilated body parts found in the spring of Tattarisuo (pictured) in 1931 were used to practice black magic?

Source: https://www.mtvuutiset.fi/artikkeli/tattarisuon-mysteeri-lahteesta-loytyi-kymmenien-ruumiiden-osia-tekijaksi-paljastui-kuusihenkinen-noitapiiri/8987518#gs.cy9o5g

Reviewed:

Created by Juustila (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Juustila (talk) 08:37, 12 August 2024 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Nice work on a neglected topic. ~~I don't speak Finnish but verified the source with DeepL Translator. Well done!~~ BorgQueen (talk) 09:55, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

Actually, I got carried away. I was copyediting the article myself and then realized that I was getting too involved to be objective. I'd like another reviewer. BorgQueen (talk) 18:38, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
Looks mainly good. I also verified the source and added an explicit mention of black magic into the article body per that source. I don't like that the coven mention is confined only to the lead, where it is unreferenced, and I don't see that word used in the source. I might recommend removing it, or I'm open to hearing a counterargument. Ed ^{[talk] [OMT]} 02:54, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
- @Juustila: pinging. BorgQueen (talk) 08:41, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
  - @Ed and BorgQueen: I changed that word "coven" to "small group". Of course, let me know if it doesn't sound better to you either. Juustila (talk) 10:41, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
    - @The ed17: pinging. BorgQueen (talk) 15:28, 13 August 2024 (UTC)
      - @Juustila and BorgQueen: Apologies for the confusion my signature caused. I trimmed the coven part of the hook and think this is good to go. Ed ^{[talk] [OMT]} 15:32, 13 August 2024 (UTC)