Template:Did you know nominations/Terry Schofield

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:35, 22 June 2015 (UTC)

Terry Schofield

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• ... that prior to coaching the German national basketball team, Terry Schofield had won three national titles playing for UCLA under John Wooden?

• Reviewed: Charles W. Wantland‎

Created by Bagumba (talk). Self-nominated at 08:21, 31 May 2015 (UTC).

• Date and size check out, but the hook looks disjoint in the article. —Vensatry _(ping) 19:16, 7 June 2015 (UTC)

• @Vensatry: Can you elaborate on what "looks disjoint", specifically, what problem(s) you feel need to be addressed? Thanks.—Bagumba (talk) 05:09, 8 June 2015 (UTC)

• Both the facts are present in the article – Coaching the Germany national basketball team and winning three national titles for UCLA under John Wooden. But the exact hook must be present in the article. —Vensatry _(ping) 07:51, 8 June 2015 (UTC)

• I am unaware of this rule that the hook had to be contiguous in the article, not just merely verifiable. Can you cite the specific criteria that you are referring to? Thanks.—Bagumba (talk) 15:07, 8 June 2015 (UTC)

• The reviewing guide states "The hook fact(s) must be stated in the article, and must be immediately followed by an inline citation to a reliable source." In this case, both the facts are present. I ought to be more clear, being contiguous or not isn't an issue here. But when you say "that prior to coaching the German basketball team, he had won three UCLA titles, one fact is somehow connected to the other. I cannot see this connection in the article (in text). —Vensatry _(ping) 17:51, 9 June 2015 (UTC)

• @Vensatry: Thanks for the clarification. I've tweaked the article to mention that his stint with the German national team began in 1980, which is supported by both the existing English and German source. It was already stated in the article that the titles with UCLA were from 1969 to 1971.—Bagumba (talk) 22:17, 11 June 2015 (UTC)

All set —Vensatry _(ping) 18:20, 18 June 2015 (UTC)