Template:Did you know nominations/The Brimstone Sluggers
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:09, 17 October 2015 (UTC)
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The Brimstone Sluggers
[edit]- ... that The Brimstone Sluggers is Crazy Town's first studio album in 13 years?
- Reviewed: Roscoe Simmons
Converted from a redirect by Freikorp (talk). Self-nominated at 02:58, 3 October 2015 (UTC).
The article is clearly new enough, long enough, and cites plenty of reliable sources. The main issue here is that the hook is not cited, nor is it written in that way in the article. Other than that quote in the reception section, the only place it is alluded to that this is their first album in 13 years is in the lead statement "and was the first album by Crazy Town since Darkhorse was released in 2002." If you want to keep the hook as-is, I'd recommend rewriting that sentence in the lead to "It was released on 28 August 2015 and was Crazy Town's first album released in 13 years since Darkhorse in 2002." That is, assuming you can cite that. Otherwise, rewrite the hook to be something like "... that The Brimstone Sluggers is Crazy Town's first album released since 2002." and cite that. Other than that, there are some minor formatting issues that should probably be fixed. The date in the infobox should be dmy formatted, like the rest of the article. And "Membran Records" in the promotion section shouldn't be italicized.--十八 02:51, 4 October 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Juhachi. I've reworded the lead sentence accordingly and placed the AllMusic reference as an inline citation. The AllMusic reference specifically states that Darkhorse was released in 2002, that this album was released in 2015, and that "13 years is a long time". I've also un-italicised "Membran Records". Let me know if anything else needs to be changed. Cheers. Freikorp (talk) 03:39, 4 October 2015 (UTC)
