Template:Did you know nominations/Typhoon Joe (1980)

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:16, 12 July 2017 (UTC)

Typhoon Joe (1980), Typhoon Kim (1980)

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... that Typhoon Joe and Typhoon Kim struck the Philippines within a week during July 1980? Source: HKO
- ALT1:... that Typhoon Joe and Typhoon Kim together claimed 71 lives in the Philippines? Source: USAID

Reviewed: Rainier Beach station, Cora Semmes Ives

Created by Yellow Evan (talk). Self-nominated at 23:06, 7 June 2017 (UTC).

Not fulll review, but Yellow Evan I believe you need one more QPQ as it's a two-article hook, see WP:DYKSG#H4. HaEr48 (talk) 06:34, 24 June 2017 (UTC)
Typhoon Joe (1980): Recently moved to mainspace. No POV or plagiarism issues detected. All paragraphs have at least one inline citation. The source used for "within a week" uses the term Osang but the article for Typhoon Kim states that it was known as Osating. The second hook fact isn't present in the article.
Typhoon Kim (1980): Recently moved to mainspace. No POV or plagiarism issues detected. All paragraphs have at least one inline citation. Same issues as above; the title in the cited source and the absence of the second hook.

Hook facts should be present in the article and properly sourced. Another QPQ needs to be provided. I prefer the first hook and as soon as the above issues are sorted out this will be good to go. --Skr15081997 (talk) 10:58, 27 June 2017 (UTC)

Second QBQ done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 18:17, 27 June 2017 (UTC)

Skr15081997, please complete your review as soon as possible. Note that even reviews that indicate that work is needed by the nominator should still be accompanied by a single icon/symbol indicating where it stands. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:48, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

2nd QPQ has been provided but the other issues need to be resolved. --Skr15081997 (talk) 13:31, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

The second hook fact is obtained by adding the two Philippine death tolls. Fixed the typo I think. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 17:52, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

@Skr15081997: any update on this? Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:05, 10 July 2017 (UTC)

Necessary changes have been made. The first hook is more interesting than the second one. Good to go. --Skr15081997 (talk) 08:16, 11 July 2017 (UTC)