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Siege of Jerusalem (63 BCE)

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle

Pompey in the Temple, Jean Fouquet 1470-1475

Created/expanded by Poliocretes (talk). Self nom at 12:26, 29 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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I also clarified that the picture was not painted as the events were unfolding. Daniel Case (talk) 19:22, 1 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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  • In the hook paragraph's lede sentence, we should probably reword to avoid the "however" (It used to be on the words to avoid list; while I am more tolerant of its use in intros or things like DYK hooks it should, I think, still be avoided in body text). If Pompey's entry alone desecrated the Holy of Holies, it matters nought that he touched nothing in it (although that fact is worthy of note as well). Daniel Case (talk) 19:22, 1 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]
OK now. Daniel Case (talk) 18:20, 2 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]