User:Justinhchan/sandbox
Evaluation
[edit]Strengths
- Historical facts about the background
- Neutral stance
- Explains different types of products
- Has pictures to show certain products
Weaknesses
- Uses news article for source
- Complex scientific terms
Contribution
[edit]I can add a section to talk about the effect of using hair products on people or the culture that comes with it because it would give more insight to the significance of such a topic.
I can change and add to the section "See Also" to make it have more of a meaning. Right now it just looks out of place or useless.
I could add pictures of different products to show more examples for the readers. The positioning of the images seem irrelevant too. I could move the images to different sections to go along witt the text.
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