User talk:Angel.e.sosa
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[edit]Hello, Angel.e.sosa, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:47, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
Peer Review overall impressions
[edit]The article is very thorough – but definitely needs more improvements on the gender section – which you are working on! I think that the overall status is good, it could use some formatting work and maybe cutting down on the lead. The article highlights the controversy and criticisms from multiple different perspectives, which is a good strength. Additionally, your work on the gender section is good. Talking from an intersectional perspective is good, and using substantive and descriptive representation will make it more strong. The main things I think the article needs is making the lead more basic, and taking some of the theories and viewpoints the lead talks about, and putting them in a different section. Additionally, some of the sources are only linked at the end of a whole paragraph, which leads me to believe that some sections only are pulling from one source (such as the first two paragraphs in the nature of the movement section). Maybe adding more references to these paragraphs, or throughout the paragraphs, could strengthen the information. Overall, I think the article is well developed, and your addition about gender will be very beneficial!