User talk:Cbyrd2011/sandbox

I created the "Peer Review #1" section with comments. I also made minor punctuation/grammatical edits throughout the sandbox. Overall, I think this is a good section to add to the BDNF page. Well done, let me know if you have questions about my comments/edits. BioKnitter (talk) 21:45, 13 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

For the second paragraph, I think you should get rid of the numbers and just list the disorders separated by commas. Also, I take that this is some sort of introductory material, right? If not, I think its really broad. Great information though!!! Ncameron2013 (talk) 20:57, 15 March 2017 (UTC)Ncameron2013[reply]

I think that you have added essential information to the page. The upcoming assignment is to add links and that will aid the readers a lot. I think explaining about SNPs won't be necessary, since you created a link to the article. Overall, really good contribution!Dishabhavsar (talk) 16:53, 20 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]