User talk:ChloeCambridge

Your submission at Articles for creation: Draft:David De Cremer (August 1)

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Hi i've resubmitted-- this time much plainer. Please take a look, thanks!

AfC notification: Draft:David De Cremer has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, as follows:

Actually, it does show notability, the KPMG chair by itself is sufficient for that.

But the article is written in a tone similar to that of a faculty web page or who's who entry pr [ress release, not an objective encyclopedia.

It needs to be rewritten in a plain descriptive style, without the adjectives and phrases of praise and importance. Please do this, and resubmit. And let me know on my user talk page so I can give it an more rapid review -- I tend to specialize on this sort of article. DGG ( talk ) 01:22, 13 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Draft:David De Cremer (September 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Anastasia [Missionedit] (talk) 22:19, 1 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi, re this entry, is there any progress? How should I proceed? Thanks very much! 210.13.83.82 (talk) 09:36, 21 October 2014 (UTC)Chloe — Preceding unsigned comment added by 210.13.83.82 (talk) 09:32, 21 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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~ Anastasia [Missionedit] (talk) 02:41, 3 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there, thanks for the feedback, i've changed the first sentence of the last paragraph, as you suggested, to: His business experience spans from compliance and creating ethical awareness, leadership and coaching, to developing trustworthy cultures and reputations as a business asset.

Hope this time it can pass:)

Thanks a lot.

Best Chloe

Great! I think I'll leave the draft to another reviewer, though. A set of fresh eyes can do wonders :) But it might take awhile with the 2,000+ articles waiting to be reviewed--wishing you all the patience in the world!

Don't forget to sign all your posts on talk pages with 4 tildes (~~~~). ~ Anastasia [Missionedit] (talk) 03:15, 4 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: David De Cremer has been accepted

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DGG ( talk ) 05:35, 26 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]