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22:31, 1 June 2020 (UTC)

21:12, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

Olu Okeowo

Hi, Kindly help re-improve Draft:Olu Okeowo if you can. Regards Olatunde Brain (talk) 13:34, 8 June 2020 (UTC)

I'm sorry User:Brain7days! I can't help you improve the draft because I don't see the article subject or rather the information fit encyclopedic, may be it's TOOSOON for now. Regards19:58, 9 June 2020 (UTC)

Hello M-Mustapha. I hope you are well. Many thanks for the good work you do with Wikipedia and thanks for reviewing the draft article "Allwell Uwazuruike". I am happy to revise the draft based on your recommendation. However, I am not exactly sure what is required. It is stated that the article is not adequately supported by "reliable sources". I would be grateful if you could throw some more light on which kind of sources are required as I referenced independent national dailies covering the subject including: The Sun Newspaper, Guardian Newspaper, Daily Trust, and The Nation (interviews and feature stories; references 2,3,4, etc). I also referenced the author pages on Google Scholar and Palgrave Macmillan. The subject also has a knowledge panel on Google (i.e. if you carry out a search of the name).

Is it a question of the number of sources or are the above not reliable enough? In other words, do you want me to simply add more sources or to change these ones? If the latter, could you kindly give me an indication of which class of sources you would accept?

I would really appreciate your guidance.

Thanks again for your time.


These are some of the National Dailies covering the subject that I referenced:

Daily Sun: https://www.sunnewsonline.com/allwell-uwazuruike-why-were-pushing-new-african-stories-abroad/ Guardian: https://guardian.ng/art/with-afritondo-allwell-uwazuruike-promotes-african-writers/ Daily Trust: https://www.dailytrust.com.ng/why-there-cant-be-enough-literary-platforms.html

All4prof (talk) 00:20, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

All4prof, so a couple of things, first is see WP:CITE & follow it next time when citing sources. Furthermore, the article fails to establish or explain how or why the subject of the article is notable. The article reads like a resumé found on LINKEDIN & that isn’t what Wikipedia is for. But really please if you can convert all those sources appropriately following what you have understood having read WP:CITE you may submit & I myself would review your draft. Celestina007 (talk) 00:50, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
Hi All4prof, I hope you're now OK with the above guidance by Celestina007, if you're still unclear you can ask here again. Try and improve your citations, the tone of the article and be specific of why the subject's notable for inclusion in encyclopedia. See this WP:CITE, WP:NPOV and WP:WNOT.Em-mustapha talk 05:54, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
Hi Celestina007 and Em-mustapha. Thanks so much for the feedback. It was very useful. I have now converted the sources as directed and worked on the tone of the article. I hope it reads much better now. Please do let me know if there's any thing required. Many thanks All4prof (talk) 21:27, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

The Bugle: Issue CLXX, June 2020

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21:38, 15 June 2020 (UTC)

Please check the draft

Hi, I have created a new draft.Please comment. Tila (Talk) 21:24, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

Ok Tilagran, but next time you create a draft just submit it and don't request for it review immediately because there are almost 2000 of other drafts in front of yours that are awaiting review.Em-mustapha talk 00:20, 17 June 2020 (UTC)
I apologize, I just asked for your character's opinion, I didn't want to be addressed sooner Thanks again. Tila (Talk) 00:25, 17 June 2020 (UTC)
You're welcome.Em-mustapha talk 11:48, 17 June 2020 (UTC)

Request on 09:43:19, 18 June 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Ituzechris


Hello, I am requesting assistance for the recently reviewed Yvan Buravan article, the reason of the submission decline was, "not adequately supported by reliable sources". I am trying to write on personality figures in the Rwandan art scene, and most of the sources will be from the local daily -The new times Rwanda- and I am wondering if it is considered unreliable, because then most personality figures would not have much as far as referencing their work is concerned.

Let me know what else I could improve to make the article better and reliable.

Ituzechris (talk) 09:43, 18 June 2020 (UTC)

You're welcome Ituzechris, lets start by letting you know that all entries to Wikipedia must be notable that means they have at laest meet the WP:GNG before they are included to the encyclopedia. If a draft is not adequately supported by independent reliable sources that can be verified and not just passing mentions it must be declined and or even request it deletion, so your draft needs sources to support its notability, keep on improving the draft with independent sources not from YouTube and any other social media channels and blogs, see these WP:RS, WP:V WP:IS and WP:REFB.Em-mustapha talk 12:41, 18 June 2020 (UTC)

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16:31, 29 June 2020 (UTC)

Adding content to the article

Hi, i see that you created and added tournament results to some badminton players. But, seems like you only copy-paste the tournament results which cause the information that you present does not match the facts. For ex. in Godwin Olofua, in the achievement section, you added information that stated Olofua won gold medals in the 2019 African Games and 2019 African Championships, but in fact, the gold medals won by Anuoluwapo Juwon Opeyori. So, i hope you can added information based on fact with reliable sources in your next edit. And, please correct the mistakes you made in some badminton player articles. Stvbastian (talk) 17:41, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Thanks Stvbastian for figuring this out, it was just a typo not copy paste, as you can see in the infobox it's correct there and only those two places were mistaken in the achievement section, I fixed them now he won silver and bronze instead. This Anuoluwapo Juwon Opeyori was his partner and together they won several medals in the doubles categories, so thats why I got carried away by putting the doubles category wins at the singles section of the achievement. Em-mustapha talk 18:34, 3 July 2020 (UTC)
A typo is when you trying to type "A" but you only press "S". So in this case, seems like you did not doing a factual verification to a biography of living person related articles. And look, after you said you already fixed that, another user found and fixed another mistakes you made. And then, after i check to another badminton players youve created, there were a lot of mistakes in the articles.
Peace Orji
  1. In African Games section: There is no African Games in 2018, Peace Orji won mixed doubles bronze in 2019.
  2. In African Championships section: Mixed doubles 2018 and 2019 you added wrong opponent, score, and flag. Women's doubles 2018 you added wrong score.
  3. Repeating references without using ref name=""
  4. Some references did not cite the statement in the sentences. Seems like you only copy-paste the dead link references from Dorcas Ajoke Adesokan article, even source about Dorcas Ajoke Adesokan participation in 2019 African Games you put as Peace Orji reference to statement "In 2018, she competed at the African Badminton Championships and she won two medals bronze and silver in the women's singles and doubles events".

After i found major mistakes in two articles, im not sure with another articles that you created. Especially for badminton player: Amin Yop Christopher, Sofiat Arinola Obanishola, Zainab Damilola Alabi. Stvbastian (talk) 21:48, 3 July 2020 (UTC)

Ok, issues resolved I've rechecked and fixed the mistakes I can, those articles were created during an event I participated and have created about 100 articles at that time, 26 are in here enwiki. By the way, I should have to revisit those articles all. Em-mustapha talk 15:05, 4 July 2020 (UTC)

20:18, 6 July 2020 (UTC)

Draft: Linda Iheme

Concerning about your comment of saying, the above name didn't show significant coverage on the newspapers, websites and magazines that was published, she is not notable to be Wikipedia with a main reason, most of the sources are not secondary independent source. Nonetheless, the twelve references that are used are secondary independent source which have been using in most Wikipedia. I have numerous proof that the twelve references are been cited in Wikipedia. And all of this twelve references have fully shown significant coverage of Linda Iheme. Please sir, can you assist me to fish out the sources that are not secondary independent source?. The remaining four references are the school websites which are regarded as primary source, and they are also there to verify her existence. Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 12:03, 7 July 2020 (UTC)

Thanks Mr Kwarbai, I hope this is what you said; I have numerous proof that the twelve references are been cited in Wikipedia, ..all of this twelve references have fully shown significant coverage of Linda Iheme. And Please sir, can you assist me to fish out the sources that are not secondary independent source?. I am here to help you, firstly! please I require your proofs? Secondly! I don't believe those 12 sources which I even doubt their reliability are enough for this WP:SIGCOV and finally see this WP:RS. -Em-mustapha talk 00:03, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

Draft: Kabiru Bala

Well done sir, base on the draft I submitted yesterday, I learnt that it is approved. So my question that I want to ask is that, when I viewed it on Wikipedia website, I observed it is an article but I saw a template where I'm requesting to submit, which I didn't understand it. Should I remove the template or I should submit? Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 16:30, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

When you create a draft article you are suppose to submit it to reviewers at the article for creation request (AFC) where it will be reviewed base on wikipedia's criteria of article creation and that's what you do with many of your drafts, I can see some have been rejected because they do not satisfy those criteria while others have been accepted. You are not suppose to remove draft template from your decline submission but if you feel you can create a direct article without going through draft you're free to do that, but there are other template like the maintenance template in an article are allowed to be removed when the issues raised in them are addressed. -Em-mustapha talk 17:57, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

Kabiru Bala

Well done sir, concerning Kabiru Bala article, if I search it, I will not see it in Wikipedia. Please I need a positive response Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 23:02, 8 July 2020 (UTC)

Yes you won't see it because it's still unreviewed, it's awaiting a page patroller to patrols it for issues like violations of Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, copyright violations, biography of living persons violations, conflicts of interest, and advertising. After this review is completed the patroller will mark the page as "reviewed" or "patrolled" then you can see it in your searches. -Em-mustapha talk 05:43, 9 July 2020 (UTC)

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16:30, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

Submission

Please help me to submit my article draft: Yau Usman Idris Sadeeqzaria (talk) 19:50, 16 July 2020 (UTC)

Review articles

Please help me to review these drafts. Draft: Muhammad Shafi'u Abdullahi and Draft:Aminu Ladan Sherehu Abbas Kwarbai (talk) 17:42, 17 July 2020 (UTC)

Submission and review

Please help me to submit and review my article Draft:Sarki Auwalu Sadeeqzaria (talk) 06:11, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

Submission and review

Please summit my Draft:Sarki Auwalu Sadeeqzaria (talk) 09:55, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

Submission

Please help me to submit Draft:Professor Charles Egbu Draft:Sarki Auwalu Sadeeqzaria (talk) 23:44, 18 July 2020 (UTC)

Hello Sadeeqzaria! Please when you create a draft just submit it for creation at the AFC there are many experience editors out there ready to review them you don't need to come here and asked for it review immediately since there are other thousands of articles that are awaiting review the same as yours. Em-mustapha talk 04:53, 19 July 2020 (UTC)

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Ow! 7&6=thirteen, thank you so much for the concern and the Dobos torte, I have really enjoyed it. Cheers! Em-mustapha talk 14:12, 19 July 2020 (UTC)

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