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Hi, Infinifilm. Thanks for your changes to the Beck article. I took out the last sentence and also the word "avid" because they seemed less than neutral, more like a personal assessment. If you really want that last sentence in, perhaps you could rework it in a more neutral, bare-facts way. (I expect someone will try to remove your addition because it doesn't cite published sources; I guess we'll see.) Could I ask you to clarify "Beck started a punk-poet scene with his then girlfriend"? Do you mean that Beck and Rain created an entire scene, singlehandedly? That's how it sounds. If that's not the case, it should be reworded. Candy (talk) 02:03, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
- I responded to you on my Talk page. Candy (talk) 03:02, 4 November 2012 (UTC)