User talk:JLebowski94/sandbox
draft comments
[edit]Hey @JLebowski94, I have a few comments on your draft:
- Is your intent to expand upon the current Djenné-Djenno with your content or are you going to create a new article? Right now I think the current article could be expanded with the content you've added, but it might be tough to make an article on the same subject.
- It's also a bit focused on the one series of sources (Mcintosh & Mcintosh). I know they're the principal researchers but there are many other sources in scholarly journals in the site or the various occupants which could be included to better balance the article.
- Some of the formatting from Djenné-Djenno would work in the article (look specifically at the formatting in the very first sentence).
Otherwise this looks like it will be a good addition to the article. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:02, 27 October 2014 (UTC)