User talk:Kwc2012
Hello friend MozHoag28 (talk) 15:18, 1 February 2012 (UTC)
Smithsonian Institution Archives Edit-a-Thon and Meetup!
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She Blinded Me with Science: Smithsonian Women in Science Edit-a-Thon will be held on Friday, March 30, 2012 at the Smithsonian Archives in Washington, D.C. This edit-a-thon will focus on improving and writing Wikipedia content about women from the Smithsonian who contributed to the sciences. It will be followed by a happy hour meetup!
We look forward to seeing you there!
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...and if you do not live in the Washington, D.C. area, please forgive the intrusion and you can delete this invite! Sarah (talk) 04:46, 8 March 2012 (UTC)
Thoughts on your sandbox work
[edit]Hi there! Sorry to be a bit late in getting back to you with some feedback on your work. Overall, it's looking great-- you're doing an excellent job keeping a neutral point of view and sticking to reports rather than analysis! One place you might change the language is where you say "The most powerful arguments assert"-- since it's judging the persuasiveness of arguments, you might want to change it instead to something more report-minded like "The most prevalent argument asserts that" or "Many expressing concern have asserted." Additionally, forgive my lack of sports knowledge, but it seems you're only talking about Division I and there is more than just Division I, right? So you may need to use another subheader of "Division I" either under the "history of" section you've created (IF the history of all divisions is included there), or right after the "United States" header (IF you are not talking about the history of Division II and III in your "history" section. Hope that makes sense. Finally, one more small thing-- it's fantastic that you're citing heavily throughout, but your first section is almost exclusively drawn from source 1. If you can diversify a bit, that's great-- but if not, keep it as it is, I think. Better too many citations than too few! Let me know if you have further questions, and happy writing! Sleuthwood (talk) 14:40, 14 March 2012 (UTC)
Welcome to Wikipedia: check out the Teahouse!
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Hello! Kwc2012,
you are invited to the Teahouse, a forum on Wikipedia for new editors to ask questions about editing Wikipedia, and get support from peers and experienced editors. Please join us! Sarah (talk) 16:56, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
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Wikipedia Education Program Student Survey
[edit]Hi! Please take a few minutes to fill out this survey about the Wikipedia Education Program. This is our opportunity to improve the program and resources we provide students, so your feedback and input is integral to our future success. Thank you so much! JMathewson (WMF) (talk) 20:35, 21 May 2012 (UTC)