User talk:Luciaarreola

This user is a student editor in California_State_University_Sacramento/ENVS_135_(Spring_2018) .

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Haha Hello! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Whatanerd1993 (talk • contribs) 20:17, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:23, 26 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Laura's peer review for you!

I like how you included the Hydrology and hydroelectric sections which provides important info, and I would expand on who the water is going to and its uses. For example, how much water is being allocated for farmers/ag/residential? Also, are there any problems worth noting in regards to the CA drought for this dam? If so, you could mention how this impacts recreation activities like fishing and boating.

Only a couple of minor adjustments; Under Rollins dam section: -Second sentence needs addressing as it isn’t complete.

Under Construction section: -First sentence did you mean, “the Yuba-Bear hydroelectric Project in the 1960’s” instead of 1060’s?

Under the Problems section: “Future Project” might need to be re-formatted to sub section 1 instead of subsection 2 even though you are referring to the Sediment in the Reservoir section.

Under Construction section: -Do you need a citation after your quote about Ernie? Unsure if it was from reference 4 or not in the next section, but you may want to add a citation at the end of that quote like you did in the History section for the quote beginning with “A giant stride.”

Otherwise, your page looks great! It’s very well-developed and looks like you spent a good amount of time on it. I appreciated all the pictures you included to make it visually appealing, I could add more to my wiki page! Your chart for adjusting fish meal size to your body weight I thought was helpful for readers so they can be careful about Mercury levels. Laurasurges (talk) 21:54, 2 May 2018 (UTC)Laurasurges[reply]