User talk:Papal phd

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Happy editing! DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:55, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Moved draft

Hi, you had submitted your draft under your username; I've moved it to a better title instead – you can now find it at Draft:Cross-reality. Best, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:56, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cross-reality (April 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Shadow311 was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

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Shadow311 (talk) 16:14, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Papal phd! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Shadow311 (talk) 16:14, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Shadow311,

Thanks for the review. I will work on the article considering your points.

I would like to ask about your point on the article coming across as an essay. I am not sure when or how this comes across. I cited the descriptions and the examples. Could you help me get more understanding on how to change it for the better?

Thanks, Papal phd (talk) 16:34, 26 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]