User talk:Sravi12
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[edit]Hi Saisree! Welcome to Wikipedia! I'm sure the articles you will write will be great :) STohme (talk) 20:15, 14 September 2017 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]I really loved your article! It was so fascinating to read about healthcare in India! I especially liked the references you had to various healthcare challenges in India including malnutrition, women’s health, and pediatric health. I appreciated the comparison between southern and northern India as well since I hadn’t known much about the differences in those regions. You made everything very easy to understand too, which was wonderful!
I would recommend that you go through your article thoroughly to check for grammar mistakes. Your article is wonderful and I wouldn’t want anyone to stop reading it or question its validity just because of a few missing words or commas! I would also recommend going through your article and thinking about where you could add pictures to try and entice the reader in! You have a lot of good, thorough information in your article which is great, but without visuals makes it difficult to read all the way through. It is important that you make these changes so that readers are interested in learning about everything you have to say and are not off put by silly things that deter them from finishing your article!
Finally, for the same reasons cited above, I would try and make your lead paragraphs a little bit more concise and to the point. The facts that you cited were interesting, and all the information was relative to health in India, but it was very lengthy and because of this as an intro, it didn’t grab my attention as much as it could have.
Mlk10 (talk) 23:05, 27 October 2017 (UTC)
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:02, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
Some baklava for you!
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For your contributions to Healthcare in India page! chaos1618 (talk) 11:16, 1 October 2018 (UTC) |