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Proposed deletion of File:Hol brain.jpg

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Laia Cabrera (February 5)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CatcherStorm was:
Your references are broken, please fix.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
CatcherStorm talk 05:13, 5 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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AfC notification: Draft:Laia Cabrera has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission,: it seems the only thing wrong with the ones here are the use of a single } instead of the proper }}. There are serious problems with the article's non-encyclopedic style , and those are what need to be fixed . Thanks! DGG ( talk ) 22:39, 9 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Although the structure is solid, it's not the practice of WP to analyze each individual work to this extent, unless we have multiple 3rd party sources for each of them. The customary way is to provide a section of major works., and also a list of each type of work as a list. For the list, enough information should be given for identification. For the major works, they can be discussed from the sources.
Looking at the sources, there are two problems: first, most of the links as given do not work. They're the search links you used to find them, but they do not work if clicked on. What does work is to go to the main page for the site, find the item, and then look at the url for that particular page. That's the one that should work. (you may be able to get there again with your links, since you've been there before, but other people won't). second, some of the links are not reliable third party sources. We do not consider IMdB reliable, and certainly not the artist's own site for anything but plain facts and what they think they're trying to achieve. If yo u use it for that, say something like, according to the artist, ....
As another possible problem, see WP:CPP, our guideline for close paraphrase. It can be difficult to avoid paraphrase for articles like this, but it is still necessary to change not only the words, but the sequence. You can use quotations, but only short ones. A WP article can't be composed of a string of quotations
As for prizes, try to condense the list a little--one device I sometimes use is to combine all the Telly awards, all the New York Innovative Theater Award. Each one needs a ref. You can reuse earlier refs--see WP:REFBEGIN
Now, style: do not use bold face for works, just " marks. It's not necessary to say New York, N.Y. , USA--just New York is enough. New York City is assumed unless something else is stated. Don't phrase sentences as rhetorical questions. Non-English refs are fine--give the original and a translation.
There's one key problem to think about first--is there a review or discussion of her work in general in any major publication? If so , refer to it at the start.
You may have noticed that many of the similar articles in Wikipedia are written in ways that do not match my suggestions. There are about a half-million articles in WP accepted in earlier years when the standards were lower that we need to either upgrade or remove. I unfortunately do not have the time to collaborate with you except by this sort of guidance. Do as much as you can, and let me know on my user talk page. As for pesky details, I can and will fix them up. (And you might also consider writing this as well for the French --or Spanish--WP. Especially for the French WP, look at similar articles--their expectations are different. Good luck with it.

February 2020

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Thank you. Cordless Larry (talk) 08:29, 10 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Laia Cabrera (March 22)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KartikeyaS343 was:
This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
KartikeyaS (talk) 06:58, 22 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Laia Cabrera (May 28)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vinegarymass911 was:
This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Vinegarymass911 (talk) 01:34, 28 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Laia Cabrera (December 27)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by MurielMary were:
This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.
 The comment the reviewer left was:
This draft is written in a promotional style similar to a CV/resume; also it uses IMDb, which is not a reliable source on Wikipedia. There is insufficient evidence that her achievements meet the notability standards on Wikipedia.
Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
MurielMary (talk) 10:32, 27 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Laia Cabrera

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 11:02, 29 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Laia Cabrera

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Laia Cabrera requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be an unambiguous copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from https://www.laiacabreraco.com/bios, https://www.laiacabreraco.com/resumes, and https://www.laiacabreraco.com/film-videoart. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images taken from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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