Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/John F. Bolt/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was not promoted by GrahamColm 10:06, 10 August 2012 [1].

John F. Bolt

Nominator(s): —Ed!^(talk) 02:59, 9 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured article. It's a Good Article which has also recently passed a MILHIST ACR. —Ed!^(talk) 02:59, 9 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

So far so good on prose, apart from repeating Bolt's name too often, per standard disclaimer, down to where I stopped, John F. Bolt#Formation of VMF-214. I've reviewed the changes made since I reviewed this for A-class. These are my edits. (My edits from tonight will need a few days to show up.) - Dank (push to talk) 03:24, 9 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - spotchecks not done, PD attribution tag present. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:28, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

FN34: missing bibliographic info for this source
- Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 15:13, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
No citations to Mersky. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:28, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed. —Ed!^(talk) 15:13, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

ISBNs Several of the ISBNs have bad checksums and so the clickthroughs won't work. Removing the '978' may be a start towards fixing the problem. Mr Stephen (talk) 10:01, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I've done so on the ones that are having the problem. See if that helps. —Ed!^(talk) 12:59, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

They look OK now. Mr Stephen (talk) 14:26, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - the only thing I see is on your footnote, " In 2000 this award was made retroactive to all US military personnel who served in the Korean War." Any source for this? Everything else looks good. GregJackP Boomer! 18:33, 3 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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