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Nominator(s): Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 00:55, 7 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Not many FLs in cricket statistics pages, trying make this an Exemplary list. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 00:55, 7 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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The text shouldn't begin with This is the list of. I recommend you have a look at other featured lists for similar topics, because they will come in handy when trying to write a good lede for this one. Kind regards, Alavense (talk) 07:09, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed the lead paragraph now. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 13:27, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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  • I see that this issue has apparently now been resolved, so I will do a full review in due course. One thing that jumps out at me is that there's no context provided for some of the stats or any indication of what they actually mean. For example, there's a table of players with the best strike rate, but no explanation of what strike rate is or even a link to another article that explains it. I personally know the basics of cricket but have no idea what strike rate is and the article doesn't provide me with any way to find that out. I appreciate that within an article we can assume a certain level of basic knowledge of a subject (i.e. I wouldn't expect a football article to need to explain what "scoring a goal" means) but some of the items listed here seem to go way beyond that basic level and we ought to at least afford people the opportunity to find out what these things are if they don't know, without having to resort to Google..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:28, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I understand what you mean, I'll be honest until a few hours ago even I didn't know how Average/ Strike rate were calculated, I just assumed they were somehow calculated. I've just read the relevant articles and I'll complete adding a one-line description of what they are, Thanks! Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 14:54, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude All done, you can carry on with the review now. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 11:55, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Image review by Arconning

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  • File:Hardik Pandya in PMO New Delhi.jpg - GODL-India
  • File:Shai Hope.jpg - CC BY 3.0
  • File:Fazalhaq Farooqi.jpg - CC BY 3.0
  • File:Arshdeep Singh in PMO New Delhi.jpg - GODL-India
  • File:Tim Southee 3.jpg - GFDL
  • File:2018.01.21.14.55.22-Roy c Finch b Cummins-0001 (40183230984) (Cummins cropped).jpg - CC BY 2.0
  • File:Prime Minister Of Bharat Shri Narendra Modi with Rishabh Pant.jpg - GODL-India
  • File:Aiden Markram (cropped).jpg - CC0
  • File:Virat Kohli in PMO New Delhi.jpg - GODL-India
  • File:Prime Minister Of Bharat Shri Narendra Damodardas Modi with Shri Rohit Gurunath Sharma (Cropped).jpg - GODL-India
  • File:Jasprit Bumrah in PMO New Delhi.jpg - GODL-India
  • Images have suitable captions and licenses
  • Images need alt text^^
    I'll add them tomorrow. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 15:47, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Arconning All done. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 16:07, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Support Arconning (talk) 12:29, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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  • "2024 ICC Men's T20 World Cup was the ninth edition of ICC Men's T20 World Cup" => "The 2024 ICC Men's T20 World Cup was the ninth edition of the ICC Men's T20 World Cup"
  • "Following is a list of major statistics and records from the tournament; most lists contain only the top five tiers for each record." - this is just moving the sentence mentioned above from the start to a later point in the article. In all honesty I don't think it's needed.
  • The lead still feels a bit short. Can you work in some of the "highlights" from the article?
  • "Dates given for single-match records/stats is the date fixture took place" => "Date given for single-match records/stats is the date fixture took place"
  • "the first English player to take hat-trick in T20 World Cup." => "the first English player to take a hat-trick in T20 World Cup."
  • "most wins as Indian Captain in T20Is" - captain is not a proper noun so does not need a capital C
  • "Niko Davin became the first batter to be dismissed retired out in a T20 World Cup match" - link "retired out" if an appropriate target exists
  • "6 June 2024; He was later surpassed by Rohit Sharma." - no reason for capital H in the middle of a sentence
  • "Played in the men's T20 World Cup for the first time with the virtue of being a co-host.." => "Played in the men's T20 World Cup for the first time by virtue of being a co-host." (only needs one full stop at the end, not two)
  • "the 5th highest total in the history of T20 World Cup" => "the 5th highest total in the history of the T20 World Cup"
  • " the 2nd and 3rd lowest totals in the history of T20 World Cup respectively" => " the 2nd and 3rd lowest totals in the history of the T20 World Cup respectively"
  • "the top two lowest match aggregates in the 2024 tournament" => "the two lowest match aggregates in the 2024 tournament" (can't really be "top" of the list given that it was a "negative" record)
  • Most runs - player names should sort based on surname, not nationality
  • Highest scores - player names should sort based on surname, not nationality
  • ....and so on for every other table containing player names
  • "The "batting average" is the total number of runs they have scored" => "The "batting average" is the total number of runs a batter has scored"
  • Pandya image caption needs a full stop and also the word "the" before "highest batting average"
  • "Hardik Pandya of India had highest batting average in the 2024 tournament (48.00 – 144 runs from 6 innings with 3 dismissals)." => "Hardik Pandya of India had the highest batting average in the 2024 tournament (48.00 – 144 runs from 6 innings with 3 dismissals)."
  • Hope image caption needs a full stop
  • "they were both tied at the 5th place" => "they were both tied in 5th place"
  • Farooqi image caption needs a full stop
  • ....and so on for every other image caption
  • "The "bowling average" is the number of runs they have conceded" => "The "bowling average" is the number of runs a bowler conceded"
  • "The "economy rate" is the average number of runs they have conceded per over bowled." => "The "economy rate" is the average number of runs a bowler has conceded per over bowled."
  • "The "Hat-trick" occurs " - no reason for capital H in the middle of a sentence
  • I can't see any value in the "batsmen out" column of the "hat-tricks" table being sortable
  • In the partnerships tables, use "and" not "&" per MOS:AMPERSAND
  • Image caption : "Indian Captain Rohit Sharma was named as the captain for team of the tournament" => "Indian Captain Rohit Sharma was named as the captain of the team of the tournament."
  • That's what I got -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:15, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @ChrisTheDude I have made all the changes and expanded the lead. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 16:09, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @ChrisTheDude: regarding sorting the players in the table, which of the following would be suitable for listing a player...
    Which of these would be the appropriate way? Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 10:21, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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