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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by Dabomb87 19:57, 12 November 2011 [1].
List of 50/80cc Motorcycle World Champions (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): NapHit (talk) 21:02, 13 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I feel that the list meets the featured list criteria. Directors I know I already have an open nomination, but it has three supports with no opposes, so I think its alright, if not feel free to remove this nom. NapHit (talk) 21:02, 13 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 16:42, 15 September 2011 (UTC)[reply] |
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The Rambling Man (talk) 18:33, 14 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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"13 years after the start of the first world championships had been inaugurated." Last three words feel redundant to me."The first championship in 1962 awarded points from first to six place". "six" → "sixth".Also, the comma after this should be a semi-colon, I think."Stefan Dorflinger won the second most championships second with four." Excess "second" here, and there's a missing "and" immediately after the comma here."Swiss and German riders were second with four and Dutch riders were third with three". The Dutch riders would be fourth, not third, since there was a tie for second.Now it doesn't say how many wins the Swiss and German riders had.Giants2008 (27 and counting) 21:05, 2 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Really should double-check the changes, anyway I've fixed it. NapHit (talk) 21:56, 2 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Don't need to link the 1962 or 1989 seasons twice in the lead. 1989 is actually linked three times.Footnotes A and B: Is the serial comma being used or not? It is for A, but not B. Should be consistent in both.Giants2008 (27 and counting) 21:25, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the comments Giants, I've addressed them all. NapHit (talk) 21:40, 28 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- fixed the serial comma issue as well. NapHit (talk) 21:56, 2 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I still see the comma in that sentence (from the second comment). Giants2008 (27 and counting) 20:02, 5 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Just seen that comment that was not struck, should be sorted now. NapHit (talk) 11:15, 12 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- I still see the comma in that sentence (from the second comment). Giants2008 (27 and counting) 20:02, 5 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- fixed the serial comma issue as well. NapHit (talk) 21:56, 2 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Arsenikk (talk) 09:37, 12 October 2011 (UTC)[reply] |
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Overall a well-composed list. Arsenikk (talk) 13:47, 7 October 2011 (UTC)[reply] |
- Support Arsenikk (talk) 09:37, 12 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Harrias |
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;Comments from Harrias talk
Otherwise, the list looks very good work: well done. Harrias talk 10:54, 12 November 2011 (UTC)[reply] |
- Support: nice work. Harrias talk 11:59, 12 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.