Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of awards and nominations received by Lorde/archive2
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was archived by SchroCat 07:39, 13 January 2015 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of awards and nominations received by Lorde (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Simon (talk) 13:18, 13 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Personally I think that this list is appropriate for a Featured List. I will appreciate any comments that help improve this list. Cheers, Simon (talk) 13:18, 13 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 07:19, 18 December 2014 (UTC)[reply] |
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The Rambling Man (talk) 09:44, 17 December 2014 (UTC)[reply] |
Comments from WikiRedactor
[edit]- Six external links that should be corrected.
- Done. Simon (talk) 02:21, 28 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- The first and second sentences can be merged to say "New Zealand recording artist Lorde is well known..."
- Done. Simon (talk) 02:21, 28 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- In the introduction, can you change "as of now" to a specific month for clarification?
- Done. Simon (talk) 02:21, 28 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
The list looks to be in good shape, I don't really have anything else to add right now! Once these corrections are made I'll take another look-through because I am a little tight on time lately, so I'll set aside some more time to thoroughly look through it. WikiRedactor (talk) 15:46, 27 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- @WikiRedactor: I have addressed all of your concerns above. Much thanks, Simon (talk) 10:57, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from SNUGGUMS
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Overall, very impressive work. Snuggums (talk / edits) 03:00, 3 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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- No problem, I now support Snuggums (talk / edits) 05:19, 3 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from Crisco 1492
- Lorde is a New Zealand singer known for her contrary view of pop culture with that of her contemporaries. - That is possibly the poorest definition / first sentence I've seen in my time on Wikipedia. "Contrary view of pop culture"? It's been "in" to be "contrary" for ages. Can we define her a bit better than this, please?
- I have removed the "contrary" information and rewrite a bit. What do you think? Simon (talk) 10:48, 6 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- At the age of 13, she signed a deal with Universal Music Group (UMG) and started to write music. - So what did she do before she signed? Just sang?
- Added a piece of information about Lorde's career beginning. Simon (talk) 10:48, 6 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- The album has sold 2.7 million copies worldwide, - as of when?
- Added date. Simon (talk) 10:48, 6 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- and was preceded by four singles: "Tennis Court", "Team", "No Better" and "Glory and Gore". In 2014, Lorde contributed four songs to the soundtrack for The Hunger Games: Mockingjay – Part 1, including the single "Yellow Flicker Beat". - ref?
- Sources added. Simon (talk) 10:48, 6 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Additionally, she earned a pending Golden Globe nomination for Best Original Song for "Yellow Flicker Beat". - "pending" reads strange here. Also, when is the ceremony?
- Fixed. Simon (talk) 10:48, 6 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- None of the descriptions of the awards are referenced. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:39, 4 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Personally I think the descriptions of the awards don't need references because it is already sourced in the award articles. (i.e. Madonna). Simon (talk) 10:48, 6 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- I'd have insisted on references there, too. That something is referenced elsewhere is not sufficient reason to not reference something in the nominated article, particularly at the featured level. This is the only point holding me back from supporting. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:44, 6 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- I have added sources. Much appreciated, Simon (talk) 05:59, 9 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for the review! Simon (talk) 10:48, 6 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- I have addressed all of your concerns. Simon (talk) 09:12, 10 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. - SchroCat (talk) 07:44, 13 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.