Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of international goals scored by Luis Suárez/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 23 October 2018 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of international goals scored by Luis Suárez (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): The Rambling Man (talk) 15:40, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Another famous and notorious international footballer list, in the same mould as my previous efforts... The Rambling Man (talk) 15:40, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from Aoba47
I am pretty unfamiliar with football/soccer so apologies in advance. Wonderful work with the list, as always! My comments are below:
- I would add ALT text to the top image.
- Alt text done. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:43, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- I think there is an error in this part (Suárez became is his country's top scorer at the age of 26), specifically "became is his".
- Indeed, good spot, removed "is". The Rambling Man (talk) 16:43, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- According to WP:NUMBERS, integers above nine should be represented with numerals, so for this sentence (Suárez scored eleven goals during Uruguay's qualification campaign for the 2014 FIFA World Cup, making him joint top scorer with Robin van Persie during qualification.), I would use "11" instead of "eleven".
- Actually, MOS:NUM says "Integers greater than nine expressible in one or two words may be expressed either in numerals or in words " so in this case, "eleven" is just fine. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:43, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- My mistake; thank you for the clarification! Aoba47 (talk) 16:55, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Actually, MOS:NUM says "Integers greater than nine expressible in one or two words may be expressed either in numerals or in words " so in this case, "eleven" is just fine. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:43, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Otherwise, everything else looks good to me. Aoba47 (talk) 16:22, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Aoba47 thanks for your review, I've addressed and/or responded to your comments above. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:43, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for addressing everything. I support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 16:55, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Aoba47 thanks for your review, I've addressed and/or responded to your comments above. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:43, 5 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- The only thing I can see is that "4–0 2014 World Cup qualification game" (and another similar usage) just look a little odd, with the numbers kinda running together visually. Maybe it's just me. But is there a way to avoid this? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:22, 8 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- ChrisTheDude I think I've addressed those two issues, cheers! The Rambling Man (talk) 10:27, 8 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Nice one - now happy to support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:32, 8 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Support − Looks good to me. Great job! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 19:03, 16 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; the supports are a bit light on this one so far, but at this point the international goal lists are almost paint-by-numbers as far as reviewing goes and I saw no issues in my read-through. Promoting. --PresN 16:21, 22 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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