Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Municipalities of Aguascalientes/archive1

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The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 23:32, 28 January 2018 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Municipalities of Aguascalientes

Featured list candidates/Municipalities of Aguascalientes/archive1

Nominator(s): Mattximus (talk) 01:39, 4 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I used my previous nomination, Municipalities of Colima, as a template for this list, keeping similar format and sourcing. I believe it meets featured list requirements but I am very open to any suggestions for improvement. This list is part of a greater goal of creating a featured quality list for all municipalities, adding to my previous 16 promoted lists of municipalities all using similar formatting, making them look more consistent and encyclopedic. Thanks for helping me on this project. Mattximus (talk) 01:39, 4 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Support – Honestly can't find anything, basing everything off your other list. Great job! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 16:50, 6 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Dudley

"The largest municipality by population is Aguascalientes, the state capital, with 877,190 residents, whereas the smallest municipality by population is San José de Gracia with 8,896 residents." No need to repeat "municipality by population".
Worth mentioning that Aguascalientes has over two-thirds of the population?
Ref 6 is bare url.
Looks fine. Dudley Miles (talk) 11:52, 10 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your suggestions. I made all of them, but left in "by population" since I now broke it into two sentences due to your second point. What do you think? Mattximus (talk) 01:58, 11 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Dudley Miles (talk) 10:38, 11 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 13:04, 26 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

30em.

Done

Are you sure all incorporation dates are on page 66 of ref 8? Probably needs to be a page range. Done
In the refs, INEGI is linked thrice out of four. Either always, or once, the first time round. Done

The Rambling Man (talk) 16:12, 19 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your excellent review! I've made most changes, and a few more remain. I will also make the suggestions on my previous nomination Municipalities of Colima to ensure consistency for wikipedia pages. Mattximus (talk) 15:10, 20 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I've now completed all your recommendations. Thanks again The Rambling Man!

One query above. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:33, 22 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Support my concerns addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:04, 26 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:03, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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