Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Seinfeld (season 1)/archive2
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was not promoted by Matthewedwards 18:02, 14 February 2009 [1].
- Featured list candidates/Seinfeld (season 1)/archive1
- Featured list candidates/Seinfeld (season 1)/archive2
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- I am renominating this list at FLC. --Gman124 talk 15:51, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Truco
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- Support - problems fixed to meet WP:WIAFL.--TRUCO 21:58, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- To correct a correction, when referring to a person or fictional person, use who and not that. Also, "was aired of NBC" should be "aired on NBC". no need for the "was" and "of" is obviously a typo. Otto4711 (talk) 21:47, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Done --Gman124 talk 22:07, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- To correct a correction, when referring to a person or fictional person, use who and not that. Also, "was aired of NBC" should be "aired on NBC". no need for the "was" and "of" is obviously a typo. Otto4711 (talk) 21:47, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose Doesn't meet criterion 1 (professional standards of writing) of the FL criteria. Examples from the lead alone:
- "The pilot met with poor reviews, as a result, NBC passed on the show." Not a grammatical sentence; the first comma should be a semicolon.
- Done --Gman124 talk 18:01, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- "and gave Seinfeld a budget to create four episodes" I think "allotted" is a better word here.
- Done --Gman124 talk 18:01, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- "which began airing on May 31, 1990" So all four episodes began airing on that date? I don't think so. Try: "the first of which began airing on May 31, 1990
- Done --Gman124 talk 18:01, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- "Seinfeld later went on to become one"-->Seinfeld became
- Done --Gman124 talk 18:01, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- "one of the most successful sitcoms" In terms of what? Popularity, revenues, cultural references, etc.
- Done fixed to most popular as stated in the USA Today article. --Gman124 talk 22:49, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- "As well as every episode from the two seasons"-->In addition to every episode from the two seasons
- "features bonus material" Comma after here. Dabomb87 (talk) 17:28, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Oppose - First, I was under the impression that there was a minimum number requirement for featured lists. I'm not seeing it in the criteria but I have seen it mentioned in other FLC reviews. Five items may be too few for a featured list. If not, then my concerns are...
- Episode summaries may be too detailed, possibly implicating copyright as a derivative work although I am not an expert in that field.
- I don't think they are too detailed, in fact I think it could be longer. When this list was nominated previously, someone opposed it having one line summary and said it should be "3-4 times bigger than they are". Now that they are 3-4 lines long now you're saying it should be less. I don't know what the heck's goin on with that. --Gman124 talk 22:34, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- As I say, I'm not an expert. I'm going by WP:PLOTSUM and my own previous experience with GA nominations for films and TV episodes. The ideais that plot summaries shouldn't serve to replace the experience of viewing the episode. If others feel that the summaries as written are acceptable then I'll certainly defer to their judgment. Otto4711 (talk) 23:34, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Otto4711
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Strong Oppose
- The reception section is not WP:NPOV as there are no negative reviewers. I notice a negative mention in the lead I suggest using it to balance out the reception section.
Ref 3: TV.com is not a reliable source- That is not TV.com it is actually TVGuide.com --Gman124 talk 22:12, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry that was a complete error on my part. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 00:15, 6 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- That is not TV.com it is actually TVGuide.com --Gman124 talk 22:12, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Prose problems - a few examples, by no means the whole story
"NBC passed on the show" - passed is to colloquial- Changed passed to decided not to pick up --Gman124 talk 22:49, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- " Larry David was the main show runner for this season, who was also one of the producers" - also is redundant, and it reads funny with the "who". Use "and one of the producers" instead.
- Done --Gman124 talk 22:12, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"Soon after the "Stock Tip" episode", the table calls it "The Stock Tip", which one is it?- Changed it to The Stock Tip, since that's the episode name. Gman124 talk 22:12, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I just removed the line also. I don't know if it is necessary to say how many more episodes wee ordered after saying that the next season was ordered in the previous line. --Gman124 talk 22:24, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Changed it to The Stock Tip, since that's the episode name. Gman124 talk 22:12, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"the first of many nominations" - not very neutral, try listing them instead of using weasel words like many.- I have removed this. --Gman124 talk 22:12, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- In fact on further investigation "This episode was nominated for a Writer's Guild Award, the first of many nominations for the series. Brandon Tartikoff kept a scene from "The Stake Out" cued up on his office VCR to show guests how funny Seinfeld was; despite this, NBC was held off broadcasting the first four episodes until summer." is purely copied from [5] - this copyvio (this caused me to change to a "Strong Oppose")
- I removed this, but kept the Writer's Guild nomination part. Also is it still copy-vio if we add the link where we got the stuff from as a reference? --Gman124 talk 22:12, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- You would have to put in quotes. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:15, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I removed this, but kept the Writer's Guild nomination part. Also is it still copy-vio if we add the link where we got the stuff from as a reference? --Gman124 talk 22:12, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Rambo's Revenge (talk) 20:20, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I have struck some comments, but still oppose as I still feel this list is below featurable quality.
- Ref 11 in no way cites the production codes.
- "The pilot met with poor reviews" Like? Try and give an example.
- For WP:NPOV try and provide a worldwide perspective. Did it air in any other countries.
- Is Seinfield available on any digital medium. iTunes, Amazon Unbox and the like?
- Citations for DVD region release dates?
I realise there was there are only 5 episodes but the whole thing (lead, reception section) just seem a bit short. Rambo's Revenge (talk) 19:32, 9 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose I think an article that only lists 5 things is really not a FLC. It should be reviewed as a normal article. The criteria for FL are to address specific challenges in the wrting of encylopedic lists, that this article doesn't face. I know the "at least 10 items" is unoffical, but this article shows why it exists. Eg. We don't consider a 5 book series to need a list.Yobmod (talk) 12:28, 11 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing comment General feeling is that this isn't a list with some prose, but an article with a list, so even though it's well written and may well meet all the FL criteria, if it isn't a list it can't be listed at WP:FL. I think you'd have a good chance at WP:GA WP:FAC though. Regards, Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 18:11, 14 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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