Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/The Office (American season 4)/archive1
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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was not promoted by User:Matthewedwards 03:15, 20 October 2008 [1].
previous FLC (09:21, 25 August 2008)
Is this list ready to be featured? Nergaal (talk) 17:01, 6 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- What makes the following reliable sources?
Current ref 29 (CBS and ABC...) says the publisher is ZapToIt but it links to a page on Office Tally. I think you got a link mixed up somewhere.Pick either last name first or first name first on your references and stick with it. Right now you have authors in both formats.
- Otherwise sources look good, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:22, 7 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- what do you think of the new links? Nergaal (talk) 19:05, 15 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- repetitive wording in "who are both executive producers on both versions"
- "with Feig and Whittingham both directing multiple episodes." both isn't needed here
- "ten of which... four of which"
- remove the "the" at "returned on the February 11,"
Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 16:55, 15 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- How's now? Nergaal (talk) 18:14, 15 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.