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1988 Giro d'Italia

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I've listed this article for peer review because… I've done considerable work on the article to get it from stub to Good Article status, with my main hope to make this a Featured Article. I would like Featured Article level criticism and help with any possible breaks in the wikistandards(?). Just an all over review and list of corrections I guess. I tried getting a review before but nothing came of it.

Thanks for the help. Disc Wheel (Malk + Montributions) 17:45, 16 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Giants2008 comments –

Teams: "The teams presentation took place on the 22 May". Don't think the second "the" should be here.

Done. Disc Wheel (Malk + Montributions) 04:32, 20 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Race overview: Minor, but the comma after Rodi Garganico should probably be a semi-colon instead.

Done. Disc Wheel (Malk + Montributions) 04:32, 20 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

What is the maglia rosa? For the sake of non-cycling fans, this should be explained somewhere, maybe in the lead.

I did it at the first mention, is that a little better? Disc Wheel (Malk + Montributions) 04:32, 20 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Classification leadership: Hyphens in the fourth paragraph should be en dashes instead.

Done. Disc Wheel (Malk + Montributions) 04:32, 20 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

All caps in refs 1, 2, and 48 should be removed.

Done. Disc Wheel (Malk + Montributions) 04:32, 20 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Any references from newspapers or magazines should have the publishers italicized.

Done. Disc Wheel (Malk + Montributions) 04:32, 20 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Giants2008 (Talk) 01:26, 20 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]