Wikipedia:Peer review/2023 Union Square riot/archive1

2023 Union Square riot

I've listed this article for peer review because I want to help with getting this article to GA status.

Thanks, Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 12:58, 30 November 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

• Look for additional sources on Google News, Google Scholar, WP:LIBRARY, or your local library system.
• The article lede is quite short. It should include information about the Aftermath, Response, and Analysis.
• Why is the NYT source in the Further reading section not used as a source in the article?

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 00:17, 1 December 2023 (UTC)

 Done @Z1720, is that all? — Davest3r08 >:) ^(talk) 14:53, 2 December 2023 (UTC)