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I've listed this article for peer review because it's already a GA, and I'd like to see it reach FA. Hopefully, it will be a part of a good (or even featured) topic as I work on articles related to Inside No. 9. I think the topic's an interesting one- it's an episode from the new series by Pemberton and Shearsmith, of The League of Gentlemen fame. Thanks, J Milburn (talk) 18:56, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
- If anyone has any views about the non-free content use in the article, they are welcome to comment here. J Milburn (talk) 22:55, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
Comments from Midnightblueowl
[edit]This isn't a theme with which I have any expertise, but I have a few pointers that might be of help. Midnightblueowl (talk) 14:05, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
- In the lede, we refer to "the couple"; perhaps the meaning here could be made more explicit, i.e. a couple of children, a married couple etc.
- Perhaps mention that Psychoville was a TV series in the introduction.
- In the Production section, you state "offered the "ideal" format", but we should probably be clear who exact we are quoting.
- ""A Quiet Night In", in addition to Pemberton and Shearsmith, starred" - Maybe this would be better rephrased as "In addition to Pemberton and Shearsmith, "A Quiet Night In" starred..."
- ""part Chuckle Brothers-esque slapstick, part Tarantino-esque blood-letting"" – links to Chuckle Brothers and Quentin Tarantino ?
- Add a reference after the quotebox referencing the complaint in the "Reception" section. Midnightblueowl (talk) 14:05, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks for your comments. I've made the changes you suggested. J Milburn (talk) 15:55, 9 March 2014 (UTC)