Wikipedia:Peer review/Abdollah Mirza Qajar/archive1

Abdollah Mirza Qajar

i'm planning to nominate this article for FA, i'm looking forward for any suggestions. thanks. Amir Ghandi (talk) 04:23, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

Drive-by comments

• The following sources are cited under the Bibliography section, but are not used in the prose as in-line citations. If they have some significant work on the topic, better to cite them. If they provide certain mention of the topic or closely related topics, better move then to "Further reading" section. Else remove.
  • Al Davod, Ali (Winter 2001). "دخمه ارغون" [A look at Tomb of Arghun by Habib Yaghmaei]. Nashr-e Dansh (in Persian) (102): 57–58. ISSN 0259-9090. OCLC 607709011
  • Amanat, Abbas (1997). Pivot of the universe : Nasir al-Din Shah Qajar and the Iranian Monarchy, 1831-1896. Berkeley: University of California Press. ISBN 9780520914056. OCLC 44964072
  • Anosh, Abolhasan Fayyaz (2011). "پديدة رست مالتواريخ؛ تأملي بر شخصيت محمد هاشم آصف و اثر تاريخي او" [Rostam Al- Tavarikh An Analysis of the Character of Mohammad Hashem Asef and his Historical Work] (PDF). Tahqiqat-e Tarikh-e Ejtemai (Social History Studies) (in Persian). 1 (1): 97–122. ISSN 2383-0484. OCLC 7854919621
  • Ostadi Moghadam, Kazem (2015). کتابشناسی خط فارسی و تغییر خط [An Encyclopedia of Persian Calligraphy and It's Changes] (in Persian). Tehran. ISBN 9786000437336. OCLC 1243881046

– Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:06, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

* @Kavyansh.Singh: All removed Amir Ghandi (talk) 19:09, 1 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

@Amir Ghandi: I haven't taken a look at this, but I note that the first FAC was concerned that there was information missing. I would look through WP:LIBRARY to see if there are additional sources about this person. I would also seek the help of a mentor, who can help get your first article to FA status. The mentor can comment in this PR to keep improvements in one location. You can also comment on Wikiproject talk pages to ask for assistance. Are you interested in keeping this PR open? Z1720 (talk) 22:04, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

@Z1720: I actually thought this PR was closed. Regarding the information, as i said in the FAC, most of sources are primary sources written by Qajar-era historians.Amir Ghandi (talk) 01:37, 31 January 2022 (UTC)

@Amir Ghandi: If you would like to close the PR, please see [[[WP:PRG]]. As for the sources, I suggested looking for more sources because the article is short. More sources might give more information that can be added to the article. Z1720 (talk) 04:15, 31 January 2022 (UTC)

Added a minor note on the Discovery of tomb of Arghun which formally was deleated by the Copy editor.Amir Ghandi (talk) 18:11, 1 February 2022 (UTC)