Wikipedia:Peer review/Aguilera (album)/archive1

Aguilera (album)

I created this page last year right after the album's release. Seeing as the album was being released in three EPs, it was difficult to keep the articles independent without the material of all the pages overlaping. Now this page is totally independent from the pages for La Fuerza and La Tormenta (EP), and its material is well written, sourced, and separated into well defined sections. I think the album is deserving of its B-class quality assessment, and could be a great GA nominee in the near future. This peer review would be beneficial for the article, as it's already a good article.

I'm aware that a few sources need to be archived or swapped for better ones. Additionally, the album will not be released in physical format until later this year, so some of the credits might not be complete or entirely correct, while information on its recording locations is very limited to what has been said in passing, or what has been posted by the official account of the studio itself. This information will need to be cross referenced with the album's liner notes after its release in June. Another problem is that the physical release seems to change repeatedly, as it was originally slated for a December 2, 2022 release, was later pushed to January 13, 2023, and now it's expected to release on June 2. Despite this, I hope you will take the time to review this article, hopefully improving it until further informaiton is released, bringing the article as close to GA status as possible. Thanks, 204060baby (talk) 10:50, 6 February 2023 (UTC)

Comments from Z1720

Some comments after a quick skim:

• "The album is scheduled to be released in CD format on June 2, 2023." Needs a citation
  •  Done Took a citation from the release history section, which also features an archived link that shows the original scheduled date of December 2, 2022.

• "Five singles have been released from Aguilera; three of them are featured on La Fuerza, one on La Tormenta and one on La Luz." Needs a citation
  •  Not done Instead I removed the entire sentence as it is redundant, and doesn't add anything to the article.

• All the "Notes" in "Track listing" need citations
  •  Done I added the citation for the digital release note, citations for the credits are included at the top of the track listing section.

• I think "Personnel and credits" needs a citation, even if it is to the liner notes of the album.
  •  Done Added citation at the top of the track listing section.

• Suggest expanding out the YouTube citations to the format described in WP:VIDEOLINK
  •  Done Followed the format.

• Per WP:FORBESCON, Forbes sources written by contributors should not be used as sources (ref 79)
  •  Done Replaced the reference with an Apple Music link instead.

• "Critical reception" section falls into the "X says Y" trap. Consider [WP:RECEPTION]] for tips on how to avoid this.
  •  Done Fixed the sentence format.

Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 01:32, 9 February 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for your comments @Z1720, they were very helpful. 204060baby (talk) 14:40, 9 February 2023 (UTC)