Wikipedia:Peer review/Al Ahly SC/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to Know what improves should i do so it could be a GA
Thanks, Crosskimo (talk) 18:59, 2 July 2020 (UTC)
- You certainly have had to wait a long time for this review @Crosskimo! What an interesting article. I would recommend some changes:
- Firstly, copyediting the article. There are several instances of letters that are or aren't capitalised, and some section titles that are unusual (for example the one titled "(1990–2005)". Maybe a request at WP:GOCE could help, but also you could do this yourself.
- I think most of the lists should be split to a separate article such as List of Al Ahly SC awards and personel (or something similar)
- There are the occasional areas that lack references
- Some images are of iffy quality, such as "Omar Lotfy the founder of Al Ahly"
- "Egyptian Patriot Saad Zaghloul, the Minister of Education became the first honorary president of Al Ahly" is an instance of WP:WEASELWORDS" I suggest you remove the "Egyptian Patriot" (I'm sure most politicians would claim to be patriots, and that is irrelevant to this article)
- Something that I personally am not sure about - perhaps ask at WikiProject Football - is whether some of the things included are just trivia.
In case you don't know, good articles are reviewed against six criteria here (WP:GACR)
Hope that this helps. Let me know if you have any questions. Cheers --Tom (LT) (talk) 01:17, 30 September 2020 (UTC)