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Alfredo Fiorani

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I've listed this article for peer review because… I would like some help to format it according to Wikipedia's canons Thanks, Max Peltuinum (talk) 20:42, 23 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'm CactiStaccingCrane (talk), and this article need serious improvement. Peer review is for article that is in high-quality, not for C or B-class articles. Nevertheless, I think you find Wikipedia:Simplified Manual of Style useful to make the article more wiki-like. You might also want to add more content, polish the grammar, add image to the article, reformat the date, replace euphemisms based on Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Words to watch and rephrase some section titles. You might want to have other editor with the same interest to edit with you. Come back when the article is in much higher quality, I wish you a good luck! 08:51, 27 September 2021 (UTC)

Thanks! I'll get to work right away. I'm not a native speaker of English, so forgive me for any mistakes and, if you can, correct them or help me correct them. I would be very grateful to you.--Max Peltuinum (talk) 10:27, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]