Wikipedia:Peer review/Alma Mater (New York sculpture)/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm looking to get it to GA status.
Thanks, Normsupon (talk) 23:07, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments by Epicgenius
[edit]- I would recommend moving "Design" either below or after History - my recommendation would be above. The "Reception" section reads like it would read better at the end of the article.
- What is the modern reception of this sculpture?
- Commas aren't necessary in "month-year" dates, like "September 1903". They are, however, necessary after "month-day-year" dates like "March 4, 1901". See MOS:DATEFORMAT.
- Besides the 1970 bombing and 1978 refurbishment, are the only major events in the statue's later history composed of protests and pranks?
These are just a few things I noticed on a quick read. – Epicgenius (talk) 16:22, 23 September 2021 (UTC)