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Annette Olson

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Thanks, Robert Fredrick (talk) 08:54, 3 February 2008 (UTC)

Comments from Kakofonous There are a few problems that I notice:

• Comments like "…often, the only female competing!" and "(Olson’s eyes are actually blue, not brown!)" are not very professional, and the article would read better if they were phrased in a more appropriate tone.
• The "Interesting Facts" section is not recommended by Wikipedia. (See Wikipedia:Trivia sections for more information.)
• I see that there are some references that appear to be duplicates. To make the reference appear as one entry with multiple links (a more easily readable method), within the first occurence of the <ref> tag, type <ref name="[whatever you want to name the reference]">.....</ref>. In subsequent references, type <ref name="[whatever you want to name the reference]"/> and it will appear as one reference.
• If they exist, consider looking for more references for the article.

If you have any questions, just ask them here or on my talk page. Kakofonous (talk) 16:29, 3 February 2008 (UTC)

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