Wikipedia:Peer review/Batman: The Dark Knight Returns/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because this graphic novel was a major storyline for Batman and Frank Miller as well, and I believe it has potential for at least a GA. I understand the lead needs expansion, and the article is way undersourced at the moment. Any suggestions you can provide would be helpful (where to look, any books you know of). Anything else you think this article needs to really help it shine, be bold and speak up.
Thanks, BOZ (talk) 17:10, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
- Redtigerxyz
- The "Characters" has few opinions, then hard-core facts like "Superman is now simply a pawn for the US government.", "strongly suggested as a reaction to the death of the former Robin, Jason Todd.", "He is more sarcastic than ever" to name a few. These are interpretations (and border WP:OR), which need references.
- "Character appearances in other series" needs references
- In Countdown: Arena, the Superman from The Dark Knight Returns. How does one know, he is from the novel not Superman in general?
- "a girl who resembles Carrie Kelly, called "Kelly",", "The Batman episode "Artifacts" is set in a possible future (2027) that resembles The Dark Knight Returns. " who says so? Borders OR. Needs references
- "Much of the dialogue in the segment is lifted directly from the pages of Batman: The Dark Knight Returns" reference needed
- write about sales and include more reviews.
- See GA Batman: Anarky for ideas to expand. --Redtigerxyz Talk 13:28, 10 July 2009 (UTC)