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Bedfordshire

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I've listed this article for peer review because I feel it has real potential for development, and is very important. It is rated as high importance by both WikiProject England and WikiProject UK geography, yet it is currently a lowly B-class. I would like to find out what improvements I could make to get this article to either GA or A.

Thanks, Acather96 (talk) 20:37, 19 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Maxim comments

To be honest, the article is still quite stubby.
Many sections aren't written, so they should be
Many sections are written very choppily, e.g. one-sentence paragraphs. I tweaked the Geography section a bit in that regard, but you need to work especially on the lead, as it's five choppy sentences (and five choppy paragraphs)
Many sections are missing citations.
Use existing FAs as a model for the article, e.g. Greater Manchester
To sum up my advice in a nutshell: the improvements to be made right now are the article's expansion and referencing. After that, you should submit again to peer review for more in-depth suggestions.

Maxim_(talk) 01:30, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]