Wikipedia:Peer review/Black Clover (season 1)/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to get suggestions from outside editors before I plan to take it to FLC. Any comments on how we can improve this list would be very much appreciated.
Thanks, Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 06:11, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
- Just made a brief check up so I would recommend:
- Wikilink stuff in the lead.
- The section of the lead exploring the plot could be tone down a bit using only the premise of Asta's journey.
- Explain what are some names: What is a Wizard King? This is important for casual readers.
- Will do. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 09:20, 3 February 2019 (UTC)
- Some of the latter episodes are quite long? Does too much stuff happen?
- I'm planning to trim the summaries down to at least 200 words or less per WP:TVPLOT. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 22:46, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
- Update: All of the plot summaries have been trimmed to fit the WP:TVPLOT guidelines. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 05:30, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
Hope this helps. By the way, I'd avise you to review other peer reviews to exchange feedback. Good luck.Tintor2 (talk) 16:26, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
Just a quick update: Miniapolis is currently undergoing a copyedit of this article. Lord Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 02:45, 23 February 2019 (UTC)