Wikipedia:Peer review/Bronx High School of Science/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because…
I would like to submit it for a GA soon, and would like to clean it up before then. Any detailed comments to make this article as clean and top quality as possible would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks, Iankap99 User:Iankap99 00:37, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
I am a long-time fan of Wolverines, so I will give you a few minutes. This article is a long way from being ready for WP:GAC.
- The most glaring issue to me is WP:V. I would need to see at least one inline citation per paragraph before I would take this article seriously.
- Also the sourcing for many of the lists is unclear.
- Convert any ALL CAPS titles to normal font.
- Eliminate deadlinks
- I must say that I am surprised not to see a Latin motto.
- I believe the name of the yearbook is suppose to be italicized.
- File:Bxscience old.jpg claims a {{PD-old}}, but the building is noted to be a 1918 structure. Licensing must be invalid.
- The images are low quality, but this will not hold up GA. Just check around for better images and swap them in as you are able.
- WP:CAPTIONs should end in periods if they are complete sentences and should not if they are not.
- If you could merge some of the choppy paragraphs, the writing would seem more professional.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:32, 28 April 2010 (UTC)
