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Canadian National 3502

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I've listed this article for peer review because… I’m interested in what people think of the article and how it can be further improved to assist people in learning about this locomotives Thanks, ThatArmyDude (talk) 15:36, 11 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

@ThatArmyDude: Here are some comments after a quick skim:

The lede can be expanded.
Ensure there is a citation at the end of each paragraph, minimum
If you are looking for additional information, great places to look are WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, Google Books, and your local library system.
Flickr, YouTube, and blogspot website are typically not used as references because it is hard to verify that the information is reliable.

I hope this helps, Z1720 (talk) 22:58, 2 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The above ping did not yield a result, and the editor has not edited in a month, so I'm going to close this PR. A new PR can be reopened when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 16:40, 10 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]