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Casting Crowns discography

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I've listed this article for peer review because I wish to improve this article to FL-status and would like input on what needs to be changed for it to reach that status.

Thanks, Toa Nidhiki05 01:17, 21 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

It would be nice to have an image in the infobox.
- Done
"The album has sold 1.7 million copies in the United States since its release" No need to link United States.
- Done
"sold a total of 167,000 copies in its first week, debuting at number four on the Billboard 200.." Avoid the double full stop.
- Corrected
"Casting Crowns has also released a Christmas album, Peace on Earth, and four live albums," You already mentioned in the first sentence that they have four live albums.
- Done
Link RIAA and mention it as Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA).
- Done
  - Once again you've added the double full stop. Oz ^talk 22:54, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    - Whoops, fixed
Why are you only using the scope format for the tables in the Albums section? Use one format for all tables.
- Is it fine now?
  - You havent used the scope format in the Singles, Holiday singles, Music videos and Other appearances tables yet. Oz ^talk 22:54, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    - What exactly is the scope format?
      - ! scope="col"| and ! scope="row"| – just like you used in the Albums table. Oz ^talk 23:06, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
        Alrighty, fixed
Singles table needs fixing.
- Fixed?
  - The Certifications column in the "Just Another Birthday" row needs fixing.
At the bottom of the Singles table where it says "denotes releases that did not chart", could you add that to the Live releases table.
- Done
Notes can have its own section (above References section).
- Done
Theres a lot of WP:OVERLINK in the Music videos and Other appearances tables.
- I did that because they needed citations; the Eminem discography page is an example of an FL-class using links to verify such things
  - I meant there are some songs in those tables that have already been linked in the Singles tables. Oz ^talk 03:38, 23 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    - I did that because I assume it can be linked once per section.
All dashes in the references section need fixing.
- Fixed
Everything in the references section can be wikilinked (except when multiple refs are used in a single ref [e.g. #23]).
- Done
Refs – Allmusic should not be in italics.
- Fixed
Why are some refs shown as Retrieved February 18, 2012 and Retrieved 18 February 2012? Please fix this.
- Fixed
Use the cite news template for ref #7.
Ref #9 – mention the publisher as Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA).
- Fixed
Ref #15 – Jesus Freak Hideout should not be in italics.
- Done
Ref #16 – Amazon.com should not be in italics.
- Done
Use the cite web template for ref #24.
- Done
Use the cite video template for the YouTube refs.
- Done
Refs #27, #30, #36 and #45 need fixing.
- Done
Remove all caps from refs #32, #33, #35, #36, #37, #39, #40, #41, #42, #43, #44, #46, #47, #48, #50, #51.
- Fixed
It would be nice to have an External links section that includes links to the band's official website and allmusic page.
- Done

Oz ^talk 12:48, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've fixed all the issues you've addressed. Toa Nidhiki05 00:31, 23 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

More

Use the cite web template for refs #4, #5 and #17. (Note: Always use citation templates)
- Done

Oz ^talk 03:38, 23 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

More comments

The numbers in the infobox, the lead and the tables are different for the amount of albums and singles.
- Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:32, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Is there any info about the music video directors?
- I might be able to, if I go out and buy all their live albums, find a few if I am lucky. It is incredibly hard to find information on directors for Christian music videos, mainly due to a lack of coverage of Christian music videos (even in Christian circles, even). Toa Nidhiki05 16:32, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The Peace on Earth paragraph in the lead should be combined with the prior one.
- Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:32, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"...one of which was found by..." - Err, do you mean discovered?
- Yep. Toa Nidhiki05 16:32, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"...Miller, a country music musician." -> country musician
- Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:32, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Specify the albums at the top of the 'Albums' section are studio albums.
- Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:32, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Rename the level 3 headers from 'Live releases' to 'Live albums and so on.
- Done. Toa Nidhiki05 16:32, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The notes at the bottom need citations.
- For the chart positions or the "measures the top twenty-five singles that have not yet reached the Hot 100" bit? If it is the former, that is cited already. If it is the latter, I can add it, but I do not think the concept fails WP:CHALLENGE since it is widely understood as such. Toa Nidhiki05 16:32, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Oh, okay. What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 09:07, 28 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire. 06:30, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Closure

If nobody else has anything to bring up or note, I'll go ahead and close this. Thanks to both of you for your input - it was valuable and helpful. :) Toa Nidhiki05 20:19, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]