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I am listing this for a PR because we (WikiProject Indian Premier League) want it to reach GA status. Thank you. Dipankan ^{(Have a chat?)} 10:18, 14 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

See my comments at the Good article review. If you have any questions or want further input, feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. Harrias ^talk 10:53, 1 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Lead should be three paras, see WP:LEAD.
Consider restricting the table of contents to just the second heading level.
" as CSK[2])" put ref outside parenthesis.
"Mahendra Singh Dhoni [4] " don't have spaces between text and refs.
" Chennai right next to beach" this isn't grammatically correct in English. "the beach" would be better, but really, is it significant enough for the lead about the cricket team?
"Chennai Super Kings (CSK) is the most successful team" you've already abbreviated the team name.
Don't overlink IPL.
Check "singh" in the infobox for capitals.
3-year -> three-year.
Lots of cricket jargon without linking, this will be inaccessible to normal readers.
Batting average, bowling average etc, all need links.
What does * mean?
Really, you need a non-cricket reader to look at this (I get it but others wouldn't, so keep the PR open until you get a non-cricket fan review!)
"skipper Dhoni's blistering innings" be careful not to become like a tabloid paper
Don't use bold for emphasis in the table per WP:BADEMPHASIS.
Dhoni's salary is referenced but where are all the other's?
Where is the player list referenced?
Fixtures and results section is unreferenced as well.
IPL season, check sorting, it doesn't work at all.
Tables with a "Total" row, that row should always be at the bottom despite sorting.
Make sure all references have as many fields as possible, as a minimum publisher, access date, title, author (where available), date of publication (where available) etc.