Wikipedia:Peer review/Christina Milian/archive1

Christina Milian

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I feel it really need to be improved. I hope to get it to GA status, but I can't do it by myself. Please look through and give me your thoughts!

Thanks, Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 01:51, 10 March 2008 (UTC)

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)

• Image:Christinamilain.jpg has no fair use rationale for inclusion in this article. - Removed Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 01:00, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
• Attend to the warning template, the copyediting issue - if need be, head over to WP:LOCE. - Done Corn.u.co.pia ♥ Disc.us.sion 07:54, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
• Year ranges in infobox should use en-dash instead of hyphen per WP:DASH.
  ** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
• "Milian did commercials" unpleasant reading.
  ** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
• "wasn't" - avoid contractions, so "was not".
  ** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
• "I heard Santa On the Radio." - "I Heard Santa On The Radio". or "I Heard Santa on the Radio" or something else? The current doesn't look right to me!
  ** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
• Acting career section is four short paras, consider merging and improving the prose.
• "Dec. 10 — 16 " - 10–16 December at the least...
  ** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
• "who is the ex of her ex, Beau Dozier. " - too casual... More encyclopaedic language needed.
  ** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
• Why text bold in the Singles section?
  ** Done-- Corn.u.co.pia Discussion 06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
• Films, TV appearances and awards all need citations.
• References should use the {{cite web}} template. - Done Corn.u.co.pia ♥ Disc.us.sion 07:54, 6 June 2008 (UTC)

That's a start for you! The Rambling Man (talk) 18:13, 17 March 2008 (UTC)

Please do not use graphics like "Done" to save space. Thanks, Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 00:10, 19 March 2008 (UTC)