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Cultural diversity

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After working on this article for months, I want a fresh pair of eyes and suggestions for where it goes next. I want to get to where it is ready for a GA review, but before that I think the readability, structure, and scope of the article need review. It is difficult to be comprehensive because this is an abstract concept with a huge literature. On the other hand, a large proportion of the literature that comes up when you search for "cultural diversity" is about cultural pluralism, cultural heritage, or multiculturalism, which are related but different concepts. It's important to get this right: Wikipedia itself is a cultural diversity project, and the past version of the article was weighed down with legalese, vague language, or specific local issues rather than an overview of the concept.

Thanks, MartinPoulter (talk) 11:36, 29 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

I am surprised at how short this article is, considering how big of a topic this is. I suggest expanding out the article, especially the sections with only one paragraph. Z1720 (talk) 03:36, 3 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the feedback @Z1720:. I guess my question is if the article is going in the right direction. If you're saying that it needs a lot more of the same content, then that's an affirmative. MartinPoulter (talk) 11:54, 6 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]