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Death of Yoshihiro Hattori

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I've listed this article for peer review because it could use a good bit of work and it probably could be a GA with some extra contributions.

Thanks, H.dryad (talk) 19:40, 7 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

What a fascinating article about a very sorry circumstance.

In terms of the good article criteria (WP:GA?), I think this article is very easy to ready, well-written, and suitably broad. The only one I think could be improved off the bat is by making sure you source all parts of the article, especially the quotes. When you have found sources for these I'd encourage you to nominate directly. One other small comment is that I am not sure inclusion of the 'discrimination' sidebar is completely relevant - there may have been elements of discrimination but I do not think this is the central issue in the article according to the text.

So in summary well done, a very easy to ready article that needs a few more sources and then off to GA! --Tom (LT) (talk) 23:02, 30 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]