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Effects of genocide on youth

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I've listed this article for peer review because it could be a candidate for GA with the appropriate feedback and effort.

Thanks, PEGLEG3 (talk) 19:21, 2 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi PEGLEG3, thanks for working on this important human rights topic. I'm happy to give the article a review. I see you have not made many edits to the article so far, but are you willing to make improvements if I suggest areas to work on? I've done several GAs and lots of GA reviews so I can help if you're interested in taking it through the process. delldot ∇. 04:24, 28 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

PEGLEG3: I took a peek. The article mixes up deculturation or assimilation (boarding schools) with genocide, etc. It seems one-sided as for now. I spot checked one ref for the exaggerated (?) claims and could not find it, see my edit there. Zezen (talk) 22:12, 30 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]