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I've listed this article for peer review because this article has gone through a GAN and I intend for this article to reach FA status.
Thanks, elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 21:13, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
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- Since you are still working on nominating your first FA, I would suggest seeking a FA mentor. They can comment on this PR and guide you through the FAC process. Z1720 (talk) 00:00, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
Eek's stray thoughts
[edit]I'm no expert on TV show articles, and I'm a bit short on time, but here are my quick thoughts.
in a Culture piece for Vogue that the
Vogue is external linked. Remove that or put in it the external links part of hte article.
- Good catch. I've removed the link. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 02:47, 1 May 2022 (UTC)
- The Reception section falls flat imo. Euphoria has been the subject of considerable coverage and cultural impact. Perhaps a new level two section entitled "Themes" might be useful? Off the top of my head, I would include sections discussing: drug use, Love/sex, and queer themes (especially focusing on the portrayal of trans folk). I know I've read multiple articles breaking down the themes/episodes/ideas of the show.
- I haven't found any of this articles in my research. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 02:17, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
- I would start the article with a "plot" "synopsis" "setup" or similarly titled section which lays out the basic background. It doesn't need to be long, a paragraph could do, and it need not be cited since its a plot summary.
- I haven't seen the show so I can't do this. elijahpepe@wikipedia (he/him) 15:02, 2 May 2022 (UTC)