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Evergreen (album)

This peer review discussion has been closed.

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I've recently expanded it and I'm looking to take it to WP:GAN.

Thanks, JD554 (talk) 13:29, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

"Despite McCulloch's departure and the death of drummer Pete de Freitas, guitarist Will Sergeant and bass player Les Pattinson recruited three new members" — while reading this, I was shocked to read that pretty much the whole band had died, until the very end clarified it. Maybe this could be rephrased. — Twas Now ( talk • contribs • e-mail ) 15:49, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

I see what you mean! I've reworded it to: Despite McCulloch's departure and the death of drummer Pete de Freitas, it was decided by guitarist Will Sergeant and bass player Les Pattinson to recruit three new members... --JD554 (talk) 18:48, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

Comments by Efe

• "Vocalist Ian McCulloch and guitarist Will Sergeant had previously worked together as Electrafixion before being rejoined by bassist Les Pattinson under the name Echo & the Bunnymen in early 1997." I think this should be taken off the lead? --Efe (talk) 09:55, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
  • It's important to show there had been collaboration between band members when the group was disbanded. --JD554 (talk) 12:09, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
• "The album received good reviews from the music press and was also received well by the band's fans, reaching number eight on the UK Albums Chart." Kind of random. Of course most of the fans will receive it well. --Efe (talk) 09:55, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
  • Fixed. --JD554 (talk) 12:09, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
• I am wondering if you could add a commentary about the album's music and possible its lyrical themes. --Efe (talk) 09:58, 8 February 2009 (UTC)
  • What information I've been able to get has been included in the 'Recording and packaging' section. --JD554 (talk) 12:09, 8 February 2009 (UTC)